Sorry, my comment didn´t post last time. First of all, good work. You were smart to structure the video as you did because you used constructions you already know (my name is, I live in, etc.) Very good idea.
A few mistakes. Instead of the "largest invertebrate of the world," it should be IN the world. Instead of "produce light for to see and hunt" it should just be "produce light to see." In English we never have "for" and "to" next to each other.
When we express measurement we say something is X meters long. The road is 200 km long, or the fish is 2 meters long, etc.
Finally with pronunciation "kind" and "bird." I will tell you how to say those words correctly.
Hi Nicoleta,
ResponderEliminarSorry, my comment didn´t post last time. First of all, good work. You were smart to structure the video as you did because you used constructions you already know (my name is, I live in, etc.) Very good idea.
A few mistakes. Instead of the "largest invertebrate of the world," it should be IN the world. Instead of "produce light for to see and hunt" it should just be "produce light to see." In English we never have "for" and "to" next to each other.
When we express measurement we say something is X meters long. The road is 200 km long, or the fish is 2 meters long, etc.
Finally with pronunciation "kind" and "bird." I will tell you how to say those words correctly.
Good job!
Stephanie